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Old Aug 31, 2005, 09:14 pm   #1
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Hi, I'm a teenager and my fanfiction is usually set in the future. Ever since I was in 7th grade I have been making rosters, as I grow up I notice that I'm starting to get more original.

First I have a girl I call Pale Fairy. She is totally living in a fantasy,and uses Lang's books as bases for crimes. She's college age and would make a good Tim rival. I'm thinking to use her to bring back the classic Bat-villian Age. Just the epitome of why those crazy badguys are remembered while people like Bane or Hush are quickly cast aside.

For Marvel, I have always loved the Richard's children. When I was littler I always had them in as A+ telepaths for some reason. Then I learnt that they were powerless and thus the X-Copying ended and I'm actually create something somewhat original.

I'm thinking a team and calling it The Valiance Squadron. I have a few members,and you could help me add reserves and replacements.
Franklin Richards-Paladin
Val Richards- Blonde Phantom
Brett Underhill- Leech(can't think of a better name for an energy-absorvor)
Lev Olinoyov- The Necromancer
Rann- Submariner(another reason for Namor to want him dead.)
Karina- Greybird(there should be atleast two girls in every team M.O)
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Old Sep 3, 2005, 04:26 pm   #2
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Valiance Squadron updates.

Franklin Richards-Paladin
The weapons expert,I'm making him a bit of a rebel teen. He would go seeking people like Logan to train him in the arts. He will still be smart,but he will balance it with fighting skills. Only tech. would be a force field belt.

Val Richards-Madame Mask
She just really wants to see the world,but her parents are overprotective. So she designs a costume to conseal herself. Val would refuse to tell her teamates her name so Brett christened her "Madame Mask". Her tools would be technology centered,behind her bedroom mirror would be her own little batcave so to speak.

Brett Underhill-Grey Wraith
Seems better than Leech. I want him to have grey skin and be very pale. Bishop powers basically. Omnipotent in many ways. I will go for the Spectre moments with him.Mutant,his mother committed suicide when he was very little so he has abandonment issues.

Lev Starlet
"Necromancer" is a nickname such as "Mage" to Dr.Strange. He is a very depressed person. I guess he needs purpose in life. Ukranian. Parents still alive.

Rann the Sub-Mariner
I want him to be a redhead. He will be from the "bad side" of Namor's family. I think I will make him the son of Bryyah.Hybrid of course.

Karenina-Greybird
She isn't noble or rich or anything. She is just a powerful Inhuman who wants to love everybody.Just very sweet!
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Old Sep 3, 2005, 04:53 pm   #3
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Who's Val Richards the child of. And i know i ask this alot because either i amnt paying attention or like now listening to nickleback but what are we doing her?
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Old Sep 3, 2005, 04:58 pm   #4
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She's the child of Reed and Sue Richards.

I'm including her because a) smart girls are empowering b)I don't want everyone on the team to be a mutant. c)She's Doom's familiar and I want to see how she reacts with Lev and Brett.
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Old Sep 5, 2005, 04:27 pm   #5
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Old Sep 5, 2005, 04:43 pm   #6
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Thanks. Feel free to suggest reserve members. They can be children now,or ones you invent doesn't matter as long as they don't take a major part in stories present.

I love the future and the past. Per Degaton is my favorite villian,by the way.

I'm not sure whether I should let Franklin have powers or a shield. If I give him powers it would pretty much be invulnerbility.

My first stories will be called "An Inteen Revolution". A loner boy finds a diary in an antique desk. After reading the first few pages he is convinced that it's author Maximus "the Mad" was correct. He recruits teens from all parts of Inhuman society,the major goal being to dethrone King Black Bolt. He even has a connection to the palace that he uses fully. But when Lady Crystal is saved by Vizier questions are raised. Is Vizier truly evil or just as insane as the man he worships?
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Hey Saturn Girl, here are some codenames for Brett Underhill/Grey Wraith, if you want to change his codename.
>Drain
>Deplete
>Diminish
>Impoverish
>Expend
>Squander
>Extort
>Extract
>Fleece
>Swindle
>Sponge
>Sap
>Exude
>Emanate
>Gush
>Hemorrhage
>Overcharge
>Mulct
>Pauper
>Strong-Arm
>Barnacle
>Lounge Lizard
>Parasite
>Scrounge
>Salvage
>Imbibe
>Withdraw
>Tax
>Abate
>Catheter
>Debilitate
>Enervate
>Rook
>Devitalize
>Siphon
>Conduit
and maybe the nickname "Suck-up"
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Old Sep 5, 2005, 08:54 pm   #8
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Yes,he is bit of a suck-up. Wants to be the loyalist because he has this fear...no more of a phobia that everyone he's ever love abandons him. He always blames himself.
But I like Grey Wraith because it's always a good sign when you have a member with a 'color' in their name. Green Lantern/Arrow anybody?

Heres the first reserve/replacement I could think of:
Derek Newman-Velocity
Son of a Chicago city alderman. He goes to Baton Rouge to audition for a saxophone part in a jazz band. While down there he gets into a cab late at night. The driver is exhausted and drops him off two blocks east of where he needs to be. He sees a strange light from the back of an alley,thinking that there was crime goes to check it out.
Instead he finds an interdimensional portal. Derek stands for a few minutes astonded,and is bombardent with an erry light. It soon disappears and he finds himself endowed with Superspeed.(later it turns out that the portal was caused by Brother Voodo fighting some necrodemon,go figure).
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Well if we're supposed to create children how about some X-Men kids ?

Code Name: Laserblade
Real Name : Marvin Braddock
Parents : Cyclops and Psylocke
Powers :
Laserblade can create red blades of pure physical energy from his hands. These blades when thrown at an enemy follow the same principal as a normal blade, they cut or scratch the person as a normal blade would. He also has slightly heightened reflexes and the ability to move at super speeds.

Code Name : Aftermath
Real Name : Sorin Maximoff
Parents : Avalanche and Scarlet Witch
Powers :
Aftermath is able to see into the future to predict natural disasters that are going to happen over the following week. He can then cause the aftermath of that disaster around himself from what he saw in his vision. For example Aftermath could see a drought and sap up a river's water completely that is near him.
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